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dawn_keyotie

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    Untitled

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    I really like this portrait. I find all that blonde hair in the background kind of distracting, though and it takes away from what is otherwise a strong image. My (completely inexpert) two cents.

    Better Days

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    That thing is fascinating! I would like to see this one cropped off a bit at the bottom - not sure why, just feel distracted by the big panels. Then again, I don't know - might take away from it.
  1. The sky is lovely in this pic. My only suggestions would be to create more distance between the lighthouse and the neighboring tree or to shift them out of the center. Alos, the trees do not seem very crisp, but that is difficult to do with a silhouette shot.
  2. I would have to say that my rating is a case of rating PRIOR to knowing what the heck I was doing. I apologize for dragging your rating down on this one. I cannot offer you anything constructive because I kind of blew it already.

    cute girl

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    Yes, I agree. I think this is a great portrait of this girl. She is cute and her personality comes through even though you cannot see much of her face.
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