florian_stadler

December 5, 2004

I'm trying to build a fashion portfolio and am looking to pick 3 images from a

shoot. 8 are posted in the Fashion folder for now. Also, please tell me your

opinion on color timing, cropping, and needed retouches. Thanks!

December 5, 2004

I'm trying to build a fashion portfolio and am looking to pick 3 images from a

shoot. 8 are posted in the Fashion folder for now. Also, please tell me your

opinion on color timing, cropping, and needed retouches. Thanks!

December 5, 2004

I'm trying to build a fashion portfolio and am looking to pick 3 images from a

shoot. 8 are posted in the Fashion folder for now. Also, please tell me your

opinion on color timing, cropping, and needed retouches. Thanks!

December 4, 2004

I really like the composition in this image. If there's any improvement possibilities, I can see 2:

The sun flare at bottom right, leads the eye away from the compostion. You could have raised the camera a bit to get rid of it or taken the shot 1/2 hour earlier in the day.

The composition could be even more interesting with more crop on the bottom, thus creating even more negative space. unfortunately the position of her left leg doesn't accomodate for that.

December 4, 2004

I love the mood of this image and the pose of the model. I would have liked to see you take a little more care lighting her lower body, maybe a soft & subtle backlight from camera left to bring a little more detail and spark into it. Maybe a minute hint more frontal fill on her. Also the blooming thir4d light fixture in the ceiling is a little distracting. Great picture overall though