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martin woolnough

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    Collecting salt

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    Hi Riepko, what I'm enjoying about your photography is the creativity and your eye for composition. Even your decision to submit this picture 'upside down' demonstrates this. I also enjoy the clarity of the shot which I presume was without tripod. Great job! Martin

    Sunset 016

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    Just some ideas, a straight horizon (& clouds) would improve the aesthetics. I also tried playing around with cropping in photoshop in order to make the tree less 'central' but decided to stop. I would most likely try and take it a little more off centre. Just my ideas though. Regards, Martin

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  1. Accident or not, it is great the way we are drawn to the focus of the camels eye. Of course, it helps if you've actually SEEn a camel in the first place (re the comment above) to help piece together the image. Otherwise I agree with your categorisation ... it IS humourous somehow.
  2. Just some ideas ... I would not use this particular border since it complicates the picture interpretation and also forces a comparison to the left edge being out of vertical. I would also make more contrast or deepen the shadows. Lastly, time of day for the shoot would definitely assist in getting better results (e.g. without the difficult cross shadow). Alternatively, you could come in closer and crop to a section without shadow and hone up the details and contrast.

    Untitled

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    Great portrait. Captures the essence of the man so you really feel that you 'know' him from the composition. Very well done - especially the sue of dark space for balance.

    Turists II

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    I would try a tighter crop around the sheep, while keeping a focal point on the back one staring at us. Also lower the exposure to improve contrast.

    shiva

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    It was good to have the people in the shot and for them not to be the first point of interest since it adds an extra dimension or ah ha when you see them.
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