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The picture is taken 225 meters above the shown lake, called Kallavesi. I took it from the Puijo Tower, Kuopio's famous landmark. I thought, that the picture would have more to tell about, if I converted it in B/W. I added also some scratches, to gain even older image.

So what is your opinion? Get rid of the scratches? Horizont line too middle (well, I couldn't find better crop on this one)? Something else...?

The landscape was overall pale because of rainy wheather. Old boats, although their colors were not so bright, made the situation more alive.

Now I wonder is the difference in colors still big enough? Any feedback is "accepted" :)

The difference between new part with bright surface and old brick wall was worth capturing. The new glass roof was in the middle to separate the parts from each other.

Tell me if I have got it all wrong :) All comments / critics are welcome!

Should the cloud be more visible? What about cropping, would you

have done it differently? Or anything else...?

The subject relates the wooden surface of the table, so I though

that they would match together. Ok, the light could be less bright,

but...

This is my first public picture, from which I'm interested in having

some comments. So please, tell me something.