david_s5

April 2, 2004

I like the tone of the image and the way you show the barbed wire in front of the building. I'd love to see a bit more sharpness from the columns on the front of the building, even at the expense of a less sharp fence.

April 2, 2004

I like the way my eye is drawn from statue to steeple to door. Great shot.

April 2, 2004

Try spending more time with your subject - those smiles look like the forced smile you get at the beginning of a session. Also, you may want to take more care with your film -- this looks like it got dirty and scratched during processing.

April 2, 2004

I think this shot might be improved by cropping at the edge of the right hand road.

April 2, 2004

I really like hte way the moss contrasts with the shelf mushrooms in this shot.

April 2, 2004

The drake's head could use somewhat more direct lighting so that you really see his head shine. Somewhat more sharpness for the ducks, and less on the tuft of grass on the right would also really improve this picture.

March 6, 2004

I like the light

March 6, 2004

I like the thoughtful look this pelican has, as well as the way its roost isn't besmirched by fecal matter, like most regular roosting places are.

March 6, 2004

This image appears to have been flattened by pointing your flash directly at the cat. Try bouncing your flash off the ceiling, or using a handheld flash from one side