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The lamp shade casts a shadow on the wall, and that creates visual conflict for me - nothing to do with lens choice. The lamp, as a light source, would never cast such a shadow in real life. That's why I suggested that a snoot could have been used to better control the light. I'd prefer that the walls were darker so that it appears that the room is primarily illuminated by the glow of the television. But that's just my personal preference.
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Shadows look wrong and too much light on the walls - note the shadow from the lamp on the wall. I think it would be better to use a snoot to make it look as if the man is illuminated by the glow of the TV>
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Pretty girl and a nice composition. But I don't like the lighting. The main light comes from below and the shadow from the bridge of her nose keeps light from getting into the shadowed eye socket. You also pick up a shadow below her right eye because the light is low. This really is a variaton of Halloween lighting.
I'd prefer the main light in a higher position. The kicker off of her left cheek looks good.
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Nice, but I find her foot distracting. -
Lovely exposure and composition. -
Nice concept, but I think you need to work more on lighting. The circle of light on her right cheek and the "moustache" band of light on her top lip are a problem.
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