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arachnophilia

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    castle

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    very classical good landscapy-type picture. like the sky. looks infrared?

     

    there's a distracting tree cut off on the right side. cropping would mess with the composition, i'd suggest photoshopping it out.

    Daly City, Ca.

          3

    that is some great lighting.

     

    potentially boring subject matter. i suggest either straightening that vertical, or making look obviously skewed, and cutting of the right side after the window in the center. this would balance the image nicely, and get rid of the distracting emptiness.

    Garage

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    interesting. cutting the car off at the right (opposite of direction of motion) provides a good sense of movement because it focres the eye bacwards. i like the way it's metered too.

    So beautiful

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    the pose is great, and the lighting. i like the effect of the wind in the hair. the piece of fabric is both a tasteful and elegant choice here. i'm not sure i like the repeated image of her face. is that some kind of filter, or done in photoshop?

    eleven

          5

    still working on getting a good print from this. i've printed it

    more than a dozen times in the darkroom, dodging and burning

    everytime and mess it up. haven't gotten a single result that looks

    like the digital file, or that i am terribly proud of. a few

    moderate successes though.

     

    i'm contact-printing from a makeshift negative, printed on a

    transparency. needs a little refinement because of the difference in

    tones that transparency and fiber-based paper take...

     

    suggestions, critiques?

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