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john_aceti

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    To me I think you came in too close, looks crowded. I am using my laptop so it could be just me but it appears way too much contrast, color and sharpness. Can see evidence of photo editing. What is wrong with her knee? Back off on the blue, color balance off a little.

     

     

     

     

     

    Thought

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    I used natural light, this is a crop of a larger image and other than

    edge brush and going to B&W it is virtually un-edited.

    The dark eyes are intentional, does it work here? Thought about

    adding grain but thought the freckles and grain would be too much.

    Yes she is a vibrant redhead.

    Flex

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    Photo shoot in South Carolina with an exotic dancer. Hey, I know, but

    somebody has to do it!

    Comments welcome, trying to spark interest without being revealing

  1. Thanks for taking the time to comment!

    I added lens flare from the car's Right headlight digitally with photoshop's Render feature.

    It was sharp as a razor before I did this but to me, the image was less interesting.

     

    I will try and attach the pre-photoshopped image

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    Edo

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    Great shot but not sure I like the way his left hand was cropped.

    Think it may look better if you go either more or less on right side crop.

     

    If you cant show more of the left hand (which I think shows some lens distortion. Try a crop just before the thumb shows on his left hand.

     

     

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