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    Shocking

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    For such a dramatic look I would have used a more dramatic lighting setup. Everything is clear and distinct with that high key lighting but doesn't really set a mood. And the shirt she is wearing feels a bit to old for her, more like it's her mothers shirt. Anyway technically good but have some fun your shooting digitally so you don't need to be conservative.

    girl by sea

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    I really like this shot, but my mind keeps wanting to make that dark rock under her chin a beard. But it is lovly, maybe a little dodging would help to not trick my brain.

    Bottom

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    The background seems in such stark contrast to the rest of the image it just seems a bit under exsposed. i like the lighting on the hip but not in this context.

    Self portrait 06

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    Sorry, I am horrible about checking back to this site some times. Ideas of where to go? Hum? This is such a diffrent image than that of your other phots, It's every striking. I can old say to do what you love, photography what strikes you. What is important to you. An exspect that you may have to change subjects from time to time.

    The Perfect Kiss

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    Yes this is a perfect kiss. Yes, as previosly stated the point of veiw is good. But, what really does it for me is the hair. Moving around in the wind, it feels so joyful. If iy had been hanging there limp this would not be the photo it is today.

    Untitled

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    I had a photo teacher that drilled that stuff into my head, a little here, a little less there. Small suddle things in black and white can make a huge diffrence. Sometimes it just helps to step away from what your doing for a bit, looking at an image too much sometimes we stop really looking at it.

     

    Cheers

    Robin

    Untitled

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    I really do love images involving looking though glass! Wonderful shot but you could make it even better it you dodged the far right a bit, and burned in some more deatails on the left(starting to get a little lost.

     

    Cheers, and really it's a wonderful image.

     

    Robin

    3595281.jpg

    Untitled

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    The idea is a good one, but the image could use some work. I feel like the swirls are disracting at their intensity, if you could make them more organic It hink that would be better, more dream like and a little less greatful dead. and perhaps a more muted soft background, perhaps something that flows w/ the bubbles. the black seems to flat to aid it the expression of fluidness it seems your going for.

     

    Cheers

    Robin

    coromandel

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    I really have a thing for muted color landscapes, and they are pretty popular of the moment. Just nice minimal landscapes. This would also make a nice black and white image, although I would do a little burning in the sky to add some drama, but as a color image this work very well.

     

    Cheers

    Robin

    Doom

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    I really like this photograph, everyone else did a good job of telling you about your photo, so I wont say anything again.

    Robin

    who me?

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    I really like the subject. I almost think it may have been a little more interesting to see, other cars along the street to show some contrast with the state of this one. But over all I like it.

    Robin

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