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    Spring is here!

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    My gut feeling tells me the lighting is too harsh. Maybe wait another couple hours before taking the photograph would solve the problem.

     

    There is too much background detail. Try open up one or two stops. Otherwise your photograph is pretty good.

  1. Hi.

    I am planning on using this image on a web catalog and possibly on a

    printed catalog. What do you think? Comments are welcome.

     

    Some details: photographed using a Photek digital lighthouse with the

    black velvet insert. Light sources are two SP Systems tungsten flood

    lights modified with compact fluorescent bulbs. Original image is

    available to you if you want to modify it in photoshop and show me how

    it should be done. Just email. Thanks a bunch.

  2. This is a great picture. The deatails are amazing. Now if you could swing the focusing plane more parallel with the body, which makes more of the body in focus, it would be a top notch picture.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Steve

    Porter Clough

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    A good try. I feel there are two subjects competing against each other: the upper half and the lower half. The upper half of the picture has a strong subject, the small waterfall. The lower half has another strong subject, the silky smooth water. My guess is that you are trying to achieve a calm, harmonious mood but the two strong subjects end up clashing. On top of that, the upper half of the picture is obviously brighter than the lower half, so the eyes wonder back and forth, not sure which one to look at first.

    You have the right idea here. Just seperate the two, then you would have two great photographs.

    Regards,

    Steve

  3. I like the idea. The frozen pipe is interesting. You can improve the composition by eliminating tree branches around the frozen pipe. The trees don't have to be completely eliminated, but just around the pipe to give it some "breathing room". The sky on the upper left hand corner can be improved with circular polarizer, I think.

     

    Regards,

     

     

    Steve

  4. Very interesting architecture. Very modern with the emphasis on shape and geometry. Minor point: the towers tilt toward left. Either make them vertical or make them close to 35 or more degrees from vertical. Otherwise a good piture.

     

     

    Steve

     

     

     

    Untitled

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    A good try. Try offset the tree from dead center. Loose the small bush on the lower right hand side. I also detect vignetting at the upper corners on both sides. Fixable by shooting the lens close down. Improve those and your would get a good photograph. The time of the day is good. No harsh lighting is visible.

     

    Good luck.

     

     

    Steve

    Sognfjord

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    It's a lovely place. The composition is good. But the first thing that jumps out at me is the date on the lower right hand side of the photo. Your picture can eliminate the bush on the lower right hand side of the photo. It's really distracting and ruined what can be a great photo. Also, the light seems to be on the harsh side. If you have a chance to reshoot the picture, try a different time like earlier in the morning or later in the afternoon.

     

    Good luck.

     

     

    Steve

    Catapulte

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    The subjects are interesting. But the composition can be improved. There seems to be something growing out of the person's head. Try seperating the two. A tighter crop on the right hand side can eliminate the stone column. I hope these comments are helpful.

     

     

    Steve

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