alejandro_bolivar1

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Good light and filter. Just try reducing the shadow effect on her right eye(dodging in PS). Looks like a black eye. Besides from that, good job over all.

 

Very respectfully,

Rain and mist

Nice model but bad ilumination. There is no mood. From what I can see, you shot 2 front strobes at 45 degrees and a backlight all with the same power. There is a lack of volumen due to the flat light you used. Seen and understanding light is among the hardes subjects in visual and performing arts such as photography, movies, theater, dance, etc. I sugest you look at somo of the classical portraits of Edward Weston. Also the work of 1950´s "Glamour of Hollywood" photographers.

 

Very respectfuly,

Taken behind a tree and digitaly enhansed.

The color tonal rage is very dinamic. There are a lot of colors but there is rithm not conflict among them. Looks like you used a soft filter or maybe it is just your lense. Any way, the soft look gives a lot of mood. Try using "levels" in PS to light up the image a little bit. The entire image got too much black.

 

Best regards

Onion

Try using the "curve" instead of Brightness and contrast. Adobe says it makes you loos detail. You´ll get the same results, just need to get used to it. By the way, job well done, not much to comment on.

Panama City. Digital enhansment.

The pose and the compostion are quite good. Both make for a very dinamic image. You dosificated the light quite good on the right spots. And finally, there is a good tonal range on the entire image.

Now, the way she is looking is very unapealing. The white part of the eyes are too dominant. Since her look is too drastic, her left eye looks kind of crazy. You could have got ther same look but avoiding the extreme twisting of the eyes. Personally I avoid the twisting of the eyes alltogether because it tends to weaken the strenght of the eyes.

 

Very respectfuly,

 

Alejandro

Try saturating the colors a little bit.