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dyowell

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    I actually like the cloud formation and colors in the sky. Reminds me in a way of a Thomas Hart Benton painting.

     

    The effect might be enhanced by using portrait instead of landscape.

     

    The other photo you attached might be suffering for want of a focus. It does bear witness to the vastness of those plains, but having driven across them several times, the shot reminds me that those plains are boring. Unfortunately, viewers may be sensing that you've captured the boring as well...not necessarily a good thing. The shot needs a focus combined with a composition that leads the eye to that focus. More drama in the sky would help.

    Narcissus

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    This is a really nice piece of work. I looked at the rest of your portfolio and you obviously know some things about light.

     

    Welcome to Photo.net! Looking forward to seeing a lot more!!

  1. Wonderful contrast between the classic and the ultra-modern. (Which one will still be standing 100 years from now??) Don't know if the tilt was intentional but I like what it does for the surreal nature of the result. (I think I was there last night!)

    Serenissima

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    This is a beautiful scene. My only comment is that the lamp post overpowers the silhouette of the cathedral on the horizon. That leaves my eye wondering where to land. You might try cropping it to a portrait (vertical) format, cutting out everything to the right of the sun and making the lamp post the primary subject.
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