joe g

This is a great portrait. The only problem is the sleeve - its distracting because its too big, too bright, and has too much detail.

 

I would suggest cropping a bit off the bottom of the picture, darkening the highlights of the sleeve (especially at the elbow), and blurring her arm and shirt (i.e. decreasing depth of field)

Excellent gradations of saturation and value. Very dramatic.

 

Yes, there is too much noise. Is it possible to remove it?

Fuji velvia 50 slide, scanned in minolta dimage scan dual IV @ 3200

dpi, desaturated and tinted in photoshop.

Hi Michael - thanks, I've enjoyed your Montreal pix, especially the Point Claire (?) windmill pics. The above pic was taken from the pier at teh entrance of the Lachine canal (which makes it Lachine not Dorval). I think that's Dorval Island in the distance?

It looks like a Frederick Hart?

thanks for the tip, i'll take a look at those

First roll with new Yashicaflex. Picture taken on a brutally cold

day. Mist is rising from "warmer" open water where river ice broke up.

OK, thanks for the tips Chris, I'll give it a try

Night Shot of phone booth

Night shot of a partially frozen pond.

Yet another photo.net tile roof photo. Any comments? (Aside from the

fact that this subject as been photographed to death!). I am tempted

to add some cheesy photoshop blur to reduce DOF.

Any comments or suggestions for improvement are appreciated. I have

placed this photo in the Architectural category. Thanks - Joe