wouter_schaap

please don't upload such large pictures. cant view it on my 15" screen.

amazing..

nice shot. I personally like the symmetry.

great picture!

great colours! no photoshopping here??

why not crop out a bit more from the left, get rid of the statue in the left behind and shift the focuss to the middle. otherwise nice pic!

nice colours, great light

Sorry to say, but the picture suffers from overlighting, both on the building and the shirt of the girl. The colour white of her shirt doesn't work too well either. The idea is nice though. Keep it up though!

compliments!!

Here is a quick fix, using photostudio. What do you think?

Some don't like it being asymmetric, I think it is the strength of

the shot. What do you think?

Beautiful shot, fantastic light. love it.. Brings back great memories of travelling in Pakistan! rating it at 7-7!

The flowers are nice, of course, but more attention for the background and compostition would help

At first I also thought it was a hole. How flat can you get...

Anyway, let me have a go at it with photostudio, I'll post the result here tomorrow.

I encountered this group of people celebrating a festival for lord

Krishna while I was doing fieldwork in North Bengal, India. They just

marched on while letting me take pictures, apparently proud to show

me their tradtions. Some are fully entranced, while others are

looking at these entranced companions (or at me)...

 

Having the people in the background sharpest makes one feel as if in

the middle of the group. Although others might argue it would have

been better if the lady with her hands up high had been the main

focus... What do you think?

can you explain yourself a bit further, or give an example of how you would crop the picture to improve it.

by the way, I have corrected my error and explained my low rating for your picture..

The composition is nice, with the hair froming a nice boundary, but it the face has a strange expression; something between puzzled and scared (?)

I like the picture, but I would try cropping out what I think is the lake, it distracts from the lines of the tries and the beautiful clouds..

very nice! beautiful topic, as if the road was built for these guys.. nice light and good choice for b&w

not too original. Seems you are trying to get all in to the picture. trees, grass, water, plants. Why not try to focus more on either a detail of it all, or more on the composition, the lines etc.

very nice! But it may still improve by cropping out half of the pavement in front. Try it!

the light is nice, but why not remove the black spot on the right side?

nice timing, but if you could have used a somewhat longer shutter time, the action would be more apparent from the picture.

why not crop it a bit tighter at the bottom, taking away a few distracting elements. Otherwise nice!

like the topic of the shot! but why not crop it a bit tighter, to put more focus on the guys? -i would particularly cut part of the right out. The colours are a bit too pink for me, it distracts from the topic. Why not more brownish or b&w?