jane_gibbons_eyre

August 24, 2003

Do you think the lines in the background are distracting? Thank you for your

honest critiques.

August 22, 2003

Does the composition and subject matter hold you? Could this shot be

improved? How?

August 21, 2003

Please be constructively brutal. I am very new at B&W. My camera does not

have a B&W option, so this effect was produced on the computer, with

adjustments in levels and curves, etc. Do you think it worked? What do you

think of the composition and subject?

August 1, 2003

Well I'm no professional, with no particular experience in this area of photography, but I really like this photo. The colours are so rich and the detail so interesting. It keeps me looking.

July 31, 2003

Tee hee.... Salvidor Dali...

July 31, 2003

Beautiful. The lightning is in just the right spots, and the yellow in the foreground contrasts nicely with the sky. What sort of lighting technique did you use for the foreground, if you don't mind me asking?

July 31, 2003

The yellow leaf is distracting. I think you should either use more DoF or loose it altogether. I really really like the red leaf. The lighting is fantastic.

July 31, 2003

My favourite colours. This looks like Australia.

July 31, 2003

Leaving the daily grind for a holiday of heavenly proportions....

Wonderful photo.

July 31, 2003

Really lovely. At first I thought that the object in the bottom right dominated the frame too much, until I realised it was a woman's pregnant tummy. Now I think it's just right. I don't mind the girls' faces being partly obscured, as it draws the attention back to the pregnancy. A wonderful photo of (I'm guessing) three siblings.

July 31, 2003

The monochrome is what attracted me to it. I'm not entirely sure about the composition. ...I don't know. It seems to be missing something. (Fat lot of good, aren't I!) Nice subtle lighting and colours.

July 31, 2003

Wow. Impressive. I like the rich gold tones. A very strong picture.

July 31, 2003

Lovely colours. What a terrific eye you have! I wouldn't mind this one on my wall. One thing, could you correct the slight lean to the left? Otherwise excellent.

July 31, 2003

Really lovely. Just perfect.

July 30, 2003

All constructive comments and critiques appreciated. Thanks!

July 28, 2003

All critiques welcome. Thanks for looking.

July 28, 2003

I like the idea/composition, but in this case it doesn't really work for me. I can't figure out exactly what he's doing, so it bothers me as it only tells part of the story. I normally wouldn't mind that you can't see his head, but in this case I'd like to see his face as it would help tell the story. I do like the lighting and exposure. You've used the black & white well.

July 27, 2003

I would really appreciate any constructive comments you care to make. I find the photos and critiques on this site to be most inspirational and instructional.