jerry_squires

Emmmmm...

Good it is!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Have you modified this shot in a photo editing software? The colors look too cartoonish.

Just curious......

Good shot. Balanced well well composed. beautiful subject. Posed very well. lighting soft - highlights her beauty. focused well.

I really like this shot.

What is too much contrast/darkness? Good shot. Cropping closer to the roo?

The shot is crooked. The bottom back of the CAT is out of focus(?) The rest of the shot takes away from the subject. Try cropping to the CAT - maybe the CAT and the Cabin. Reduce the contrast - make it sharper. Tends to be a bit gray.

Me too. Looks almost like a high speed film grain, but it has too much of a pattern to it. Good composition.Good use of Fstop.

Simply beautiful.

Great Work.

Great layout and composition.

My screen gives the sepia tone more of a red hue.

I might blur the shot slightly and halo the edges.

I like this shot!

 

I made an assumption - since the shot is listed as manipulated, that the color was the item manipulated. Is this true?

Perhaps it is fairer to say you have a great eye for composing color. The shots in this gallery are beautiful, but are not the original, unmodified photos, right? Do you use PS?

Your art is impressive. What did the original shot look like?

 

Good shot and good post production work!

I like the pastels. The composition is very good - linear prospective.

I like it.

The cropping really improves the focus (attention) on the subject. Much better.

Great composition.

The tree to the left leads down to the left headstone. The center headstone actually leads to the far right headstone. That stone leads to the bottom of the shot, which leads back to the tree.

The cropping is great too. I really like this shot. Good contrast - looks like it was shot on a sound studio stage.

Good Job!

 

Hi Don,

Great shot!

Just a suggestion - what if you cropped the shot so the bottom of the tomestone is just above the bottom of the photo. Maybe offset it to the right.

Even so, The shadows are great. i really like what the shadows do to the subject. The contrast is very good too.

 

Manupulated Mania.....

Nice work!

 

Glad you are alive to show the shot!

 

WOW!

You scored on originality!

Use a bit more defussed flash and a secondary light sourse on the right. It looks just a bit out of focus too. Maybe set up a 1/2 stop or so.

This is really good. What is the gray item in the upper right corner? It tends to really detract from the overall quality. The pink hue in the paper is a neat touch!

 

Very Nice. excellent contrast. Great lighting. Good shot!

Got Milk?

 

Good lighting! Brings out the crisp-ness of the features.

Good shot! Good composition. I would perfer a bit lighter.

Great color.

Very Nice - Pretty Model. Maybe crop a bit tighter on the right. Still a great shot.

Wow! This is nice!