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vatsun

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    Pine forest

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    I like your monochromatic treatment, it's different. Good DOF control. Maybe a more elevated camera position would accentuate the 3D nature of the scene - it kind of looks flat this way. That would also bring out the shadows for added effect.

    Untitled

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    LOvely color reproduction, but did you use an onboard flash? The quality of light is a bit harsh for flowers, next time, I'd consider a diffuser on the flash. Beautiful picture.

    The Journey

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    I tend to agree with Nathan. The other point being, lighting makes or breaks all still-life shots. IMHO the lighting is a bit flat, and because both table and pine cones are brown, and the incandescent lamp makes the background more or less the same tone. The concept is wonderful, I would just play around with the lighting a bit more.

    The Light

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    Nice to know that I'm not the only guy shooting into the sun... but Ricardo's idea was my motive in 'Incandescence' :). Great framing and the wisps of cloud are positioned nicely.

    A Great end of day

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    Two little things that distract me are the bright spot bang in the center lower edge and the patch of gray sky in the upper left corner - may I suggest you tone it differently? Otherwise fantastic, I love it! -- Vatsun

    Will Rice

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    It would be nice if you could somehow preserve more features of Mr.Rice's statue. The inversion works great here, but maybe you should tweak your subject a wee bit more -- Vatsun

    fairy

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    Great idea. But the lighting I find too confrontational for a picture of an angel. Perhaps a source from the front, but slightly to the left and elevated could have been softer, and get the effect of a 'light from above' which would go well with the angel.

    Parrot

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    Great DOF and compostion. I'd recommend playing around with the saturation and white balance, as color plays an important role in this picture.

    Real power

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    Excellent picture! Very vibrant, full of action! The only improvement I can possibly think of is using a different DOF, and try to make the audience unfocused. But I guess that would mean longer exposures creating motion in the shot. Great Job!
  1. Great concept. I am a bit bothered by the asymmetry in composition (bright lights at lower left unbalance the picture for me). I suppose it depends on the location, if you can get a better shot. Nevertheless, job well done! Have you tried the usual 1/3 composition on this subject?
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