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    Untitled

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    I like how you varied the work to bring out the dog. As mentioned it seems close to what you likely saw with your eyes. The brighter version has some merit as well, almost can be pumped more to a higher key. I wish I had taken a capture of the moment, nice work.

    Pontiac

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    I like the choice of b&w it seems to bring chrome out well. The curves of the car look nice at this angle. They complement the hood ornament. Did you try cloning out the dark area beyond the fender on the right? Thanks for the feed back on the house. Looks nice. Been laid up a few days. My car was hammered by a truck doing 40 mph and I am still sore. My car was standing still.

    1855

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    Len the correcting edit work does help improve the documentary picture. I did some work on other pictures I took that day. This one was pretty much out of the camera till to spiced it up. BTW it is a Shaker Home that is part of the village in Butler County.
  1. This is a good one Len, I like the light and the color.

    Her pose works well with her expression, all good timing and or planing, sometimes both.

    I would give about 1/16 more both sides, but you know me and cropping.

    Cheers friend! ....

  2. I can not say I have very little work in this area. One thought is to look at the clothing and how it is effected by the pose. When my son was a baby he had a overall jean a outfit some what like this one and the only way it photographed well was laying or being held.

     

    I think the light and color came out very well. If I we to do anything I would add more pillows and lean the child back just a bit. Have a Happy New Year Len, Cheers, Dennis

    S. S. Static

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    Excellent capture, I have seen this building before from I think about the same spot.

    I forgot the photographers name, but it is a impressive building. Did you try it in mono?

    Keep Out

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    Thanks Greg, I like the vin effect but not 100% on the crop.

    I do like it lower and closer but a touch less, tried it after your thoughts.

    Not the vin effect since I have not tried it before other than with a camera.

    Your thoughts are very much appreciated, I tend to lean to far towards minimalism.

    Untitled

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    I agree with Mark, I think the hand in focus would help with her dark looking eyes with this shadow. I like the pose but if dof is changed maybe move left her hand closer, say 3-4"

    Little Stars

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    This is hard to critique since is has both a nature and art based theme.

    The ring and what seems to be text of some sort, it seems thought provoking.

    Untitled

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    Very nice light and depth of field, if you had a little more room on the right it would be perfect. Nice work to isolate the center area.
  3. The picture shows the water droplets near flawlessly and with the back ground color it appears to be a necklage of crystal. I find it very hard to critique this picture since you have nailed all the things needed in the depth of field and light. One of the bst over all water droplet pictures I have seen in some time.

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