fran_ois_dupont

Very nice group-portrait! The technical drawbacks are largerly compensated by the original and spontaneous topic (what I mean is: assume you had a superb medium format camera with pro flashes, the result wouldn't have been the same...) (may be there would have been more kids in the frame ;-).

 

Hello Ides,

 

nice effect of the water contrasting with the desert landscape ! Overall, a rather nice picture.

However (if you need some "critical comments"), in my opinion, framing could be better (dark bush at the right is a bit disturbing).

I note also that the sky is darker in the corners of the picture...

 

Fran篯z

Unfortunately, the person is a little fussy. Nice composition

I like the mix between the colors (blue, red and yellow).

Is it macro?

Nice picture.

framing could have been better (Flamingo on the top either in the frame, either outside the frame)

Sorry, for the lop-sided frame, I'm not very skilful with the scanner yet. It's always a trade-off between quality of impression (and scanning) and time to pass for each picture.

 

Why does this person have an umbrella in a gallery? The perspective is nice, and the coloring gives an original touch, but I would have liked to see a bit more of the details (at the right)(of course, this would have distracted me from the person with the umbrella!).

I like to print all the frame of my neg. But this time, maybe a less

classical framing would have been better?

Nice portrait!