blackflute

This one works very well ... subtly mixed cues that work well together.

You captured the important parts: very good expression and nice relaxed body language. The fishnets add a little zing.

Hi Tomislav,

Thank you for visiting my works. I generally like this but it is too "in the middle" stylistically in my opinion. Mixing cues can be very productive but also very difficult to find the right balance.

As others have mentioned, this would be a good commercial image but for the hints at glamour. Perhaps pulling more strongly in both directions would help? i.e. similar styling and mood (pose is close but a little stiff) and more sheer?

From a compositional point of view I would have liked it less centered (move her to the 1/3 line camera right) but that is just me. Keep woking in this direction, I like it!