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jarle_aasland

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  1. Nice, but I think it would have been even better if the face had been completely hidden. Showing only the nose and mouth is a bit distracting. Also, the arm appears a bit large, compared to the face. I guess it's taken with a wide angle lens? Try a similar shot with a slightly longer lens, and turn the face away from the camera (or raise the arm slightly).
  2. Nice shot, but I think that a wider view would be even better. And perhaps the girls shouldn't be looking directly into the camera? Walking across the frame could prove to be a better solution.
  3. Thank you for your feedback. Personally, I believe this is one image where the rule of thirds don't apply. If a subject (like this) depends on symmetry for effect, I believe a central position is preferable. Still, thinking about it, you may be right. I'll try to crop a few different versions from the original file and see how it works out.

     

    Finally, the image is not rotated (the window is!).

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