magic1

August 3, 2009

Color is off. Horizon too centered.

August 3, 2009

Horizon too centered and tilted slightly.

August 3, 2009

Horizon is not level

July 29, 2009

A little flat.

July 29, 2009

Too much negative space on top.

July 29, 2009

Much better subject placement!

July 29, 2009

I'd do away with so much negative space around the model. If you want it I'd place the model on the right-hand side. Too much weight on the left side, especially with her facing that way.

July 29, 2009

Tighten up on your subject. and don't place it in the static center.

July 29, 2009

I would tone down the background a bit and darken the corners to help hold the eyes in.

July 29, 2009

No. I think better if you focus more on your subject.

July 29, 2009

Interesting technique. Adobe Find Edges filter?

July 27, 2009

I think a regular graduated filter (instead of a colored one) whould have been better.

July 27, 2009

Better. Previous ones were too flat.

July 27, 2009

Needs more contrast.

July 27, 2009

Dirty sensor mark about halfway up the left side of the tower

July 23, 2009

Nice exposure.

July 23, 2009

Horizon is slanted.

July 23, 2009

I would pull back the whites a bit, especially with the diaper.

July 23, 2009

Tone down the bright spot on the forehead of the man.

July 23, 2009

I would clone out the power lines for a better photo.

July 23, 2009

I don't think the limited dof works in this pic.

July 23, 2009

When cutting out items, feather your mask to avoid too hard edges,

May 19, 2008

Did I succeed? And do you like it?

April 17, 2008

Comments appreciated

August 1, 2005

crop the pole from the right hand side.

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