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    Memory Lane #2

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    An interesting photo Brad. I like the "gloomy" mood of the photo and the juxtaposition of the sharp, symmetrical headstone with the soft, natural lines of the tree.

     

    I think the composition would feel more balanced if there was some separation between the top of the foreground headstone and the tree. By shifting your camera a bit to the right it would have also increased the space between the base of the tree and the foreground headstone to better match the complimentary space between the tree and the background headstone.

     

    I would think about dodging / locally increasing the contrast on the headstone in the foreground so that the text is more distinct

     

     

  1. Taken from the shore in the harbour in Prince Rupert, British

    Columbia (the "City of Rainbows"). This is a real image - not a

    digital manipulation - the rainbow really was that vivid! Getting

    the sailboat to line up did require a bit of a jog though...

    Three Kings

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    These three "gentleman" were photographed in the north end of

    Yellowstone N.P. They were pretty oblivious to being disturbed,

    allowing me to also shoot a duplicate of this digital shot in 4"x5"

    LF from a low-pod on the roof of the truck.

    Moonlight

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    Really nice image Peter - I like the tonal range you have captured in the sky and the way the town's "light pollution" highlights the boat silhouettes. I find the moon's reflection in the lower left to be somewhat distracting and not in keeping with the soft, grainy feel of the rest of the image. Personally, I would crop off some (or all) of the bottom and/or burn the highlights down in the water. Thanks for sharing.
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