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frolickingbits

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    Alien villa

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    Woah, amazing....almost alien. The colors, texture, and just the strangeness of the shot is great. It reminds me of football masks sticking out of the hill.

    Untitled

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    I don't remember what her name was, but I know she's not Noel. She lives in Maine is about all I know about her. Strange how some people look so alike...

    Canopy

          3
    I think maybe a slightly tighter crop would really help this image, with the building in the background gone, the composition approaches more of a geometric shape. Maybe try dodging the sky to a pure white, as well.
  1. Good portrait, but I don't really understand why she is superimposed on a drab grey background. There also doesn't seem to be anything for her to rest her arm on there. And the ghosting around her right side just looks bad, to be perfectly frank.
  2. Good lighting and contrast of skin-tones and white. I would echo the comment on too much eye-shadow-with that blue color, she looks a bit like a street walker, to be honest. The facial expression is okay, looks a bit wistful, which I think would be hightened by getting rid of much of the makeup.

    "Well Hidden..."

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    Very cute shot. The only thing I could suggest is that I don't think the black frame works that well-perhaps no border, or a thicker green, or yellow-brown would look better.

    Untitled

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    Looking for some good critique of this shot. What works, what

    doesn't? Lit with on camera flash, bounced off a gold bounce card,

    and natural light.

    Untitled

          6
    Neat shot. Has a very strange otherwordly feel to it. I agree that the rocks could be cropped. I think it would look really neat as a pinhole photo.
  3. The colors are nice, but I find the composition of the shot to be somewhat lacking. Whatever the plants in the foreground are, they seem out of focus and really distract from the shot. And the straight black horizon really breaks up the photo in a bad way.

    Fountain Valley

          3
    Nice composition with the plants and landscape leading directly to the center of the frame where the river disappears. Normally I wouldn't like the midday lighting, but I think it works well in this shot.
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