daryl
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Great pose and expression, but I find the light grey on the left edge of the frame distracting. How about a little crop off that side? I'm uploading a suggestion here...
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The flower part itself is stunning but the background is too attention grabbing. There are too many colours back there. The green along the bottom fades into a brown and then across the top there is a mix of shadow above the bloom and more green, and a bit of a hotspot in the top left.
Possibly changing the camera angle slightly will make the background more uniform and the image will be that much better.
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The out of focus points of the fence in the foreground is distracting, as is the bright yellow grass. Maybe a little more space around the left edge of the frame would free up the image and give him some breathing room. As it is, there is a lot of tension with him playing into the edge of the frame like that. -
Very sensual. The curve of the snow on top of the fence is highly suggestive of the female form.
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I think the composition is great, but the cold blue doesn't work for me. I think the shot would have benefitted greatly from some warmth. A warming filter would awaken the green tones of the foliage across the left edge of the frame and give the image that much more impact.
However, it's a great composition. Keep up the great work!
Golden Silk OrbWeaver, WPB, FL
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