veit schenk
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wonderful mix of lines, lots for the eye to explore. I'd probably crop off a tiny bit on the left (that thing just above the train) and probably choose a slightly different viewpoint so that the topmost light isn't too far above the train -- at the moment I find that big gap a bit disturbing.
otherwise, I love it, passes my "I'd hang it on the wall" test.
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personally, I'd crop off a bit of the top (well, I did in photoshop...). Otherwise great, I love it. The frame adds a lot btw.
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what a great shot. Regarding your concern that it doesn't 'pop', I think you're almost there -- what does a print look like compared to what I see on my ancient monitor? (if the girl really stands out on my monitor, she must be jumping out of the picture in a good print;-)
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Veit