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Since I know that this was once a photograph and not a drawing I look at this as something surreal, at the same time the subject itself is not very contemplative. If this was mine, I would probably attach more mood to it by adding figures such as people or animals, it would then remind me of american regionalism. The composition and colors work very well.

This is a perfect shot for observation; there are a thousand stories that could uncover from looking at this. I actually feel like I am watching a movie because my focus jumps from one object to another resulting in 'static' motion effect created by my eyes. The colors are good, except that light red/pink on the left second floor window does not fit with the rest of the colors, you should try burning it. I also think everything should be just a little sharper. The light and shadows are perfect and you did a great job capturing this scene. You should also try cropping everything after the sixth window (the one with the light red shades) to get rid of the pole, even though it creates a balance with the fire hydrant, it seems unnecessary, unless you really care about how the woman's shadow interacts with the entrance to the building. You might consider using a black border since the top windows fall out of the frame. Overall, I enjoyed this very interesting photograph, congratulations.

The photograph has this very confrontational, existential character to it, i like it very much.

There is a definite feel of happiness in this photograph.

Very interesting concept, though this much black space seems pointless. Thank you for sharing.

This might look more interesting with a tighter crop.

It would look even better if your friend wore something more formal to add to the elegance and discreteness of this photograph.

Very original. I am not sure if this symmetry works that well though, I would try cropping 1/4th of the image from the either side. Next time you should try this technique using different exposures from both sides of the model so that it could look more natural. Other than that, this is a great addition to a great portfolio. Thank you for sharing.

Good capture, reminds me of Mary C. Roth grand central series, it seems too grey though, i would like it much more if it was brighter

I like the moment you captured here, but...you should pay more attention to the light that surrounds your objects and to the composition. Shaking your camera wasn't a good idea, should be much sharper.

There seems to be too much light on the little one's face and on the bigger one's hands. The composition is nice, but I would like to see this photo from a different angle, maybe with a full view of these characters. It seems a little too posed, but i am not sure if it's a bad thing in this case. Thanks for sharing.

I didn't notice the bottom of his rear leg at first, which made me think of 'legless,' futher 'helpless,' you should try burning it in. Interesting use of motion. I enjoyed this very much.

I agree about the cropping, this photograph is not the best it can be, I think you should get rid of even more than Lum's retouched version.

 

i think it's a very powerful documentation, here's another version to bring out the child, I like your version better though, thanks for sharing

I think i would have liked more detail in those darker areas

I think it's a little too diagonal, a very sincere photograph nevertheless

it would have been more effective if you were closer to your subject

Seems that there is too much exposure on the towel

The composition is a bit awkward, and it's too dark.

There's not enough black and white contast in your photographs.

I think this photo has potentional, but the composition is not that great due to the lack of cropping and the colors are very distracting as well...with a little bit of photoshop work, you could fix it in less than ten minutes...i didn't do a good job but here's an example of what ps can do (if you feel offended by my alternation of your photograph, i will remove it):

I think this photograph would have been better without the ducks, since they are not detailed enough to be a portrait, instead them being in the middle creates a distraction.

This image if full of emotions. The dark background seems a bit unnatural, but it gives this photograph a feeling of isolation and loneliness. Thanks for sharing.

Your work inspires me

This makes a great story.