grimley
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Good color. The image seems a little fuzzy though, does it look this way on the slide or is it a side effect of its scan?
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The shadow is a cool idea. What doesn't work for me is the grass. Basketball isn't played on grass, so it doesn't really feel appropriate. -
Too much contrast?
If you ask me there isn't nearly enough. Your skin tone seems to be very similar to the background you're using. The background is also very bright. This means that the only thing that breaks this pattern is you shirt, which tends to draw my eye first.
The lighting across your face is fine, but try playing around to get deeper shadows or a more balanced look and see which of the three you like more.
Give it another try with a different background if you can, play around with the lighting a little, and you should be able to get something really nice.
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This is by far the pick of the shots you have posted. It conveys a moment that is both interesting and captivating.
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First off, i suggest recropping. the presence of your glasses in the upper right corner distract from the image.
The concept you have is a good one, but I don't really see it in this image. The people inside are very small, almost so small that its dificult to tell how old they are and your own face has very little detail to it.
I think if you wanted to try reshooting it, you might want to consider a tripod (this would eliminate the lunge that you had to do to frame this image and allow you to reframe the shot at a better angle so the people inside appear larger), and shoot in different light (a sunny day should give you stronger reflections)
Good luck
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This is a very well composed shot.
The only things that bother me are the position of the girl's head and the light on her face. If you do it a agian, mover her closer to the edge of the bed, and lighten her face a little.
Otherwise very nice!
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