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ci_p

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  1. I think the movement of the protagonists is captured brilliantly. The person kneeling down, and the person sitting at his desk are distracting, as are the lines on the floor and the stuff on the wall. These things take the viewer's focus away from *aikido* and towards the dojo and the examination. I'm sure that the *examination* is very important for the people involved, but IMHO, is not the best photo subject.

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    Too much contrast difference between rope & background. Distracting walkway. rope obsures flag. Monkey bidness going on behind flag, getting in the way of sea. Nice detail in the rope, though.
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