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    More information about "queen of my hart"

    queen of my hart

    in Fine Art

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    nicce composition - good use of background and bottom colours - intersting geomatric effect of the shapes of the skirt, the angle of the floor - the softness works well - the crop works well to my eye - maybe desaturated more, pull the colour out of the hair... a bit more towards your your other more stark work - a wonderful shot of your deserved Queen
    More information about "Fire"

    Fire

    in Fine Art

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    the untoched is interesting an has its own appeal from a stark slice of life approach - i like the 1st modified for the reaosns i stated earlier - this latest mod... more stark and haunting and stands on the strengths of that approach :: all 3 are good strong work in my opinion
    More information about "Fire"

    Fire

    in Fine Art

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    very interesting shot - effective crop - sort of face forward, kind of skewed - the eyes are always dramatic - the mouth/lips this time different, nicely expressive - nice wash out :: might be interesting without the shadow under the chin but maintaining the jawline... yet another success!
    More information about "My cup"

    My cup

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    a great composition/abstract

    good colours, cropping

    i almost think an empty cup would be more effective

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    if the side/lower shadow were not there - an even heigthened effect i am thinking.. maybe blowing out the whites a bit

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