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Very 'Escher-esque'. I keep looking for the staircase that is always ascending! Nice tone, great composition. Good shot! -
Very much like the tree - nicely done. Find the adjoining building a bit distracting - it would be less so, if it was "square" with the edge of the frame.
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I like it very much - for me, the bent shaft at the right makes the image. The "asymmetric symmetry" of the shot is very appealing. Well done. -
Love the concept of this photo... just wish the washington monument was a tad more to the left, i.e. saw some separation from the base of the column of the lincoln memorial... maybe it was impossible? Nice shot, good lighting as well - really works. -
I very much like the composition. It would also be interesting to see this composition with strong directional light so the texture of the old wooden door vs. the stone would come alive. -
I very much like the subject elements, but find the blue patch of sky in the upper left a bit of a distraction.
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Excellent abstract; great balance to the composition. Well done. -
I very much like the repeating patterns and the symmetry. Given that, I find the image slightly off center, i.e. the symmetry is centered on the horizontal axis but is not on the vertical axis. Perhaps that was deliberate on your part, but I think i would prefer it centered.
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I think the horizontal version works much better for me. In this image, you have a "wasted" foreground; I find the balance of the composition to be much better in the other version.
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This image grabs you. Nice color, excellent balance in the composition. Well done.
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Very nice balance of compositional elements, right down to the flag in the lower right corner. Nicely done. Good sharp contrast and color as well.
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Excellent clarity, color, and shadow detail. Nicely done. Only comment - I would probably crop the right edge, to exclude the small portion of building in the upper right - it is a distraction for me.
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Just now read your title, after leaving my first comment. What I saw in the image was the silhouette of a large object, with a nicely lit column in the background - the juxtaposition of the two suggesting "solemn" to me; in all honesty, the chain in front was a distraction. However, given your title (Excluded), it suggests to me that the chain is the central point of the image for you. If that is your intention, I might have lowered the perspective a bit, to get the floor beneath the chain. -
First word that comes to mind is "solemn"... image captures/conveys emotion. Well framed and composed.
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I like the abstraction of the VW logo against the shiny red metal. I suspect the reflected shadows were intentionally placed, but I think I would prefer without. -
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Great idea... however, I think (not sure) I would like it more if it were either more tightly cropped, or shot slightly wider. It is not tight enough yet to be an abstract; nor is it wide enough to put the snow/fence in context. The road (?) in the upper left is a bit of a distraction. Very nice idea, well exposed.
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Very nice shot - I would like it even more with less foreground. Well done. -
Applaud you for looking for a unique shot of a often(!)photographed NYC icon. Had you thought about tilting even more to make building top parallel with top edge of photo, i.e. take your effect to the max? I agree with the previous comment re: the sky; on a sunnier day, the light would create some interesting texture on the building skin.
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I like the tight crop and bold composition. The little bit of red at the top bothers me - it would've been nice to see just a bit more of that hood, if possible. Well done.
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The tilt is distracting; in addition, it is unfortunate that the point of the roof is cut off.
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Nice subject, well composed; B&W helps. I like the dunce cap in the corner, but I find the rest of the corner a bit too dark; in addition, the foreground is slightly out of focus, which detracts from the overall effectiveness of the image for me.
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Barry - I like this version much better than your earlier post. I would also consider cropping out the reflected trees at the top - to me, the essence of the photo are the posts in the water and their reflection. I also find the plank walkway to be a very positive addition to this theme; however, the small amount of tree reflection at the top is a distraction for me.
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