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vab3

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    Untitled

          7

    It's well done.  I've enjoyed looking at it, and think I would enjoy a drive on that road in the distance.  But, I scanned your portfolio, and found a few that I liked a lot better. 

    Aspen Trees, Aspen

          5

    I think trees are very hard to photograph well. I'm impressed with the composition.

     

    It might like it exposed a stop higher, to make the white trunks match their natural color. But not too much, you don't want to remove the early-morning feel.

    Egg

          5
    Great shapes and colors. The lighting is just right. The horizontal line on the right is interesting to me. At first I thought it should be removed, but I think it adds an important leading line and balance.

    Waterfall

          5

    The slow exposure makes a nice effect for the waterfall. The trees in the foreground help give it depth.

     

    It could be a bit sharper. Not sure if that is a focusing issue or steadiness of the camera. It is also seems to be more blue than it probably looked in real life. A small adjustment in photoshop would correct this.

  1. Had the area on the right been blurred, it would have produced an unattractive 1/4 of the frame. The rest of the lines work fine with a slight blur because the contrast makes them stand out. Excellent composition.

    Untitled

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    I love the folder! This image is not as interesting as the others. (although it does make more sense in context) I like the lines from the big tree trunks, but the lower half things blur together. Maybe it would be improved if there were more contrast between the vegetation in the foreground and the bright areas in the stream.

    The Island

          4
    I like it. The repetition of shapes gives a pleasing effect. Leading lines draw the eye into the image. The exposure is just right. It could be improved by adjusting the color levels in photoshop to make the yellow sand pop a bit more.
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