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gwen_shafer

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    Hurry up!

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    Actually, I take that back about the focus.  Having the foreground in focus gives the sense of where she is running to.  Still, if she was a tiny bit more in focus (you could see her face more clearly) it would be better.

    This is a suggestion, not a criticism.  I couldn't take such a good picture.

    Hurry up!

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    The only way this would be a better shot is if you had the face of the lady in red in perfect focus rather than the foreground. (You take what you get for timing.)  Aside from that, excellent!

    I like the blurred motion of the person on the right.  It adds to the sense of motion in what would otherwise be an interesting (symmetric) static shot.

    For a completely different approach, if most people were moving away from the camera, and there wasn't a highlight like the lady in red moving towards it,  it would be fun to focus on the far distance and leave the foreground out of focus.  That would add a sense of destination. 

    Very nice.

    Summer Fun

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    This downtown area has a fountain that shoots up jets of water from

    various parts of the street, and the kids were running back and forth

    trying to guess where to get wet, while I was trying to figure out

    where to aim the camera for the best picture.

     

    The time delay in the digital camera doesn't help.

     

    It was an action shot where I tried to set up for a good angle and

    hope for the best.

  1. I took this photo as is (although I tweaked the contrast a tiny bit.)

    I think that if I crop it it would make a better story.

     

    Any suggestions for how to crop it to get the child in the background

    skipping along the game board a more central focus to the "story"?

     

    Thanks in advance.

  2. Very funny composition and title! I would make the goose on the far left slightly smaller and move it away a bit from the others to add more symmetry to the photo. The relative size makes the geese on the far right and left look like they are in the foreground, when their viewpoint makes me think they should be in the background, watching the backs of the middle three, but this is a minor point. Plus, the shadows are wrong, so if you could alter the shadow in the "mirror" goose to the right of the central goose to match the other two it would be more realistic.

     

    Still, looks like a scary hydra headed goose that I wouldn't want to cross! :-)

     

    Excellent detail in each goose photo.

    I catch you

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    Very funny! What child hasn't had imaginary creatures play with them?

     

    I'm glad that the child's expression shows determination rather than fear.

    Hang On

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    Naman, the person hanging out on the left acts as a counterweight so the bike won't flip over in high speed turns. He hangs out there for right turns, then scramble over and lean out past the driver for left turns.

     

    It's like the crew leaning out over the railing during sailboat racing.

     

  3. It looks like an engraving, which is a nice effect. The sky (and to a lesser degree, the grass) doesn't, which takes away from the initial impression. Perhaps some photoshop to make the sky look engraved?

     

    Nice shot and nice composition.

    Zebra

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    I can imagine the zebra saying, "What are YOU looking at?"

     

    Great combination of animals and scenery. Great focus on the zebra's face.

    ...Life Go's on....

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    Great shot. Great title.

     

    I think it's the caption for the photo that really makes one think about what the past means, and yes, life goes on, which is the most important thing.

     

    I would not use sepia as this girl is here and alive now and facing the future. Sepia implies the past and history.

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