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mark_wyco

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    Capri Sea II

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    There is potential here, But I find the shot, as it is now, somewhat confusing. Is it about the rocks and white water? Is it about the clouds and cliffs in the background? What about the bouys in the water, and the structure on the cliff? I find my eye wandering to these parts of the image with no clear understanding of the visual statement you are trying to make. Try cropping out everthing but the rocks and water in the lower left hand corner.

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    I would have tried to angle the rows of flowers across the shot instead of head on. the focal point of the composition should be the pink flowers. Instead they apear to be dropping off the page.
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