jennifer_doughty

I like the composition. I would like to see just a touch more space to the right on the helper, but otherwise I think the perspective works well. Well done!

She looks a little scrunched over (her head seems to far below her shoulder line). Setting up a little bit more and including more of the subject would help.

 

The two subjects seem to be competing to me. There is just enough of the flowers for them to be distracting. Again, I think if you included more of the woman's body, the entire flower could be included and add a nice element to the image.

 

The image looks good- the subject seems comfortable and the exposure seems right on, possible a touch underexposed. Good work here, and I think with a few minor adjustments, the shot would be great.

 

Jen

I would crop some from the bottom. The black would still weight the image, but it wouldn't over-power it. It would put more emphasis on the sky, which is interesting when your eye lingers there.

The colors look a little blown out. A stop or so underexposed would help a lot I think.