wdgodwin

It's all working for me - leg lines, face expression, auto wheel, composition, sepia. The only minor fault to me is the shadow line (flash?) forward - left of the legs and forward of the dress edge. I'd rather the camera been rotated to position the flash on the opposite side and direct the shadows to the right but then the moment would probably have gotten away.

David

We all enjoy kudos but, I'm really interested in constructive criticism -

how to make it better. Thanks for looking.

David

Sergy,

It's a great start. Probably would get higher marks if a couple of faults were squared away. 1) Train of dress is buckeled, 2) far elbow should be posed to not be seen (breaks line of figure), 3) Face is not light enough to draw attention. My eye is not natuarlly drawn to face area. Perhaps a bounced flash into the deck would have aided. My eye wanders trying to find the subject in the scene. Of course I wasn't there and don't know the full circumstances you were under. Nice Pic.

David,

Everthing is going well for the impact except for the "Totem Pole" compsition. Instead of stacking the couple on top of the bouquet, perhaps shifting the bouquet to the left to break the stacked look and a little more balance to the compostition. Just my 2 cents. Overall a great image.