mark cohran
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Some details in the shadows would have been nice.
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Motion blur in the left side of photo is distracting to me -
Nice silohuettes--great color in the sky. Some noise and banding in the jpg though. -
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Good capture of the sun, but the landscape leaves much to be desired. -
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Highlights are blown, but nice composition -
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I like the diagonal line of trees leading the eye from left to right. -
Very nice use of repetion and great silohuetts. The progression of color and the postions of teh wings really draw the eye into the photo.
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Good saturation and detail. The lightbeam adds an unusual element to the shot. Good use of repetition. -
This might be better in black and white, or with a return to the spot in the spring to bring more color into the photos. -
This photo could have been improved by getting closer to the bird, and moving to the right to get the branches clear of the face. Focus is soft, and there is very little contrast or saturation.
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Evocative shot. Like the colors, but the blown out highlights in the sleeve are distracting. -
Very nice macro shot....my only suggestion for improvment would to be to shift the focus to the eyes instead of the body.
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I like this shot. Good exposure and focus, and a clearly defined subject make this a winner.
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Good framing, but I would crop the lower 1/4 of the shot. -
Depth of field is too shallow rendering portions of the baby's face too soft. Also, angle of the head is distracting (you can only see part of the left eye).
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As a snapshot, this is a good effort at capturing a fresh snow fall. As a photograph, however, it is lacking. There is no defined subject and the color balance is a tad off (although the blue cast does lend itself to evoking cold). The power lines are very distracting. My suggestion would be to use a long lens to isolate specific elements of the scene to create a more powerful subject.
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A more interesting sky (later in the day perhaps) could help this shot.
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Great portrait. I love the way the eyes "pop." Sharp and well exposed. -
Lovely model, good exposure and lighting, but the diagonal tilt doesn't work for me. I'm sure it will appeal to others.
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