tyler_meiners

This is my 10 yr old daughter Morgan. I'm quite pleased with the

look. I hope you like it. I'd love to hear your critique.

Thanks,

--tyler

I agree with Marina, Toshio´s crop is very good. When something on the edge of frame is cut off, not whole, it suggest continuation, the line goes on. The subject is the line, not the people, the people make up the line, like trees make up the forest. The foreground is fine, there is really nothing there but space, it balances nice with the head room and gives the people some terra firma to stand on. The shadow helps create the sense of being outdoors. The revised crop of Arash feels too sterile it has lost the story.

These are of course just my opinions, never the less they're right, of course ;)

I love this picture just the way Toshio submitted it. Great story telling, well done!

Gordon, Perfect exposure, and excellent composition. I'm always curious when I see a beautiful picture like this were you in the right place at the right time, or, did you plan and seek this out?

--tyler

Please, let me know what you think.

--tyler