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evanseye

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    sun flower

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    it's the color that grabs me. the contrast in the flower is perfect. nicely saturated as well -- did you do anything with lighting or filters to get it so vivid?

     

    composition is good too.

     

    any other shots in same series?

  1. wonderful angle... but you've chopped the shadow (which arguably would have been the most interesting part of the photo). moving the player into the top third would have balanced the photo better. where the heck were you to get such a bird's eye view?
  2. i wouldn't change the color at all -- i think that's where it gets it's mood. i think i was drawn to this pic cuz the last self portrait i did had me similarly dissected. the hand in the top left is a nice touch.

    knot

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    i should have said this already but there is a reason half of this picture is out of focus: a handwritten poem was inserted into the left half of the picture. as well, the final version was cropped square.

    magic tree

          2
    a beautiful tree to be sure. i would like to see it shot at a time of day when the sun is lower in the sky and the sky is a deeper blue. also, if you could avoid getting the limbs of the neghboring tree it would be a stronger shot.

    ace hotel 2

          1

    this is the original photo, would it be suitable for a brochure or

    ad? would it be better horizontally so that the text was correct? i

    really liked this image after i got it back and wished i had spent

    some time experimenting with angle/perspective and waiting for people

    to walk by or something...

    butterfly kick

          6
    i know it is a butterfly kick because i had to do mine right after him. the comment on printing is interesting given that the image has never been printed: i scanned the neg using a film scanner

    Desert Fantasia

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    i enjoy the simplicity of this shot. i'm somewhat torn on the camel (is it?) -- on the one hand i think it offers an interesting visual distraction but on the other i think it takes away fomr the simplicity of the shot.

    Rush

          1

    at first i was going to comment that i didn't like how harsh the light at the end of the tunnel was and then i saw the train coming out of it which made me like it a lot more.

     

    looking even longer revealed the dark figure in the foreground: in his case i would have liked a little more detail as he was very hard to pick out

    Arctic Dance

          63
    it's like he's coming right out of the photo. nice separation - i think it would be hard with a white bird on white snow but your depth of field choice made it work. and great composition!
  3. the photo is nice but i would like it better if one or both of the subjects were more in focus. it looks like his cross is in focus but neither of their faces are... other than that i like the composition and lighting.
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