jeremy_taitelbaum

July 9, 2004

Any suggestions?

May 8, 2004

Makes me miss Boston.

April 24, 2004

Great subject. I just wish you had a slightly greater depth of field.

April 22, 2004

I don't really understand why you used a soft focus and simultaneously placed the model in such an authoritarian pose.

April 22, 2004

It is unfortunate that the players' faces are obscurred by shadows, but that's not something you could easily control. Still, you captured well the excitement of the situation.

April 21, 2004

Your comments are always helpful.

March 22, 2004

It would be a shame to lose some of that fog, but a tighter crop might bring the viewer into the huddle more.

March 22, 2004

Congradulations.

March 22, 2004

I think it may be too dark. Overall, a pleasing image.

March 21, 2004

Shows good potential as a shot. Could benefit from a higher contract.

March 21, 2004

Good image, could be a bit sharper.

March 21, 2004

I don't understand exactly why you chose to display this image at this orientation. It may have a stronger (albeit different) impact if it were turned 90 degrees clockwise, or shot at a higher angle.

March 21, 2004

I like how the two main elements in this image are abstracted in different ways (one with b&w, the other with a soft focus). This leads to numerous (probably all equally valid) interpretations of the subject matter.

March 18, 2004

Something about this image really draws me in. Could be a little sharper.

March 18, 2004

I could use some advice on how to better frame this image.

March 17, 2004

You can tell that you adjusted some of the colors digitally. I'm not sure this was necessary.

March 17, 2004

Well done.

March 16, 2004

Comments are appreciated.

March 13, 2004

Nicely captured. The fly is at once beautiful and grotesque.

March 13, 2004

The image presents a strong feeling of desolation. Perhaps you could have used a bit more contrast to really make the light parts white, and the darks a true black.