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    Untitled

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    bit confused shot, difficult to focus on what is going on, avg colors. maybe better with larger f#, adjust curves to black bkg, and boost saturation. also maybe make stem vertical

    Caravan # 2

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    yes its a great shot and one i would be totally stoked to have taken but... it *is* a cliched shot, and when i look at it i dont think 'wow i've got to go there' or wow look at that, which i guess travel shots maybe should do, instead i think 'huh, look at that, another camel shot'. then again i'm less of a 'get on a tour'/'conde nast traveller' which this shot would be good for maybe.
  1. something nice bout this, personally i would've made it black n white and maxed out the contrast to leave only the curves in the bricks and more of a white floor. oh and lost the frame. but that would be a different picture.

    Amsterdam

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    something great going on here. it reminds me of the photographer who make steh giant prints of Paris apprtment blocks. imho this would benefit from photoshopping out the perspective angling with the windows, and then maybe using PS again with levels or curves or saturation to seperate the bikes more from the background.
  2. your whole portfolio is some of the most original work i've seen in a long time. really great idea with the kite, but more than just that the results that come out are really great.
  3. yeh now we're talkin! i like this one way better than the masts/sunset one. i reckon this would look even better if the entire shadows from the trees were in the pic, but thats just me. the horison also looks a bit skew but that may be me again!
  4. thanks for the comments. interesting point with the sharpness, i actually tried to make this one slightly blurry to increase the 'space-age'/dreamlike feel and make it less easy to focus on a point hopefully resulting in more of a general focussing on the picture, this has seemed to make the pictures more '3d' in the past and more like I am 'in' the picture. but maybe it would be better sharper!
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