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andrewhemstrought

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    The antlers overlapping the face of the third takes away from the symmetry of the composition which I think is the strength of this photo.

    Good eye for seeing a photo opportunity but perhaps one frame before and one frame after would have produced an even better result. It's the minor details that make the difference between good and great and some of those you won't see until you get back the negs. That being said, it is always wise to shoot two or three frames when lining up a moving progression.

    Iron Road

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    Very good. Great subject. Although, I'd like to see this compressed a little more with a longer lens to show more ripples in the track. A haze filter would improve the sky. This could also use a focal point ideally a train but maybe someone walking up/down the track in the distance. If you could go back there it would be worth a few more shots. These things I've mentioned make the difference between good and great. This is good but could be a 10.
  1. Fine photo. This one has what many of the other pictures on photo.net lack focal point. There are also strong lines leading into the image instead of out. The only thing that bothers me is the lamp in the upper right corner (minor really ). It seems jumbled in with the bushes and confusing the symetry of the lines. I don't know if it could be recomposed though without destroying the other strong qualities. A wider lens might do wonders to the scene. That said, this is a wonderful image. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    Hut

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    If you waited for a clowd to cover some of that harsh light and chose a different angle here you would have a great photo. Go back if you can.
  2. This photo is one of those that is better than it first seems. Nice background and I also like the model looking down and it's good to see the back of someone's neck for a change. Beautiful necks are underated.

    Floating Deer

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    I think you should have had more on the top. This would make finding the deer in mid leap a wonderful find. Blah, blah, blah,... Like I should comment on such a wonderful shot . Well done.
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