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bob stewart jacksonville

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    Multicolored sunset

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    very nice colors, and good composition. (i think the tree as a frame adds) On my monitor, and to my taste, it appears about a stop dark though. bring up levels in PS might add some detail in the shadows.
  1. Nice photo. Too bad the detail in the sand is washed out. Shooting this in early morning or late evening light would likely balance the exposure more. Also, a graduated neutral density filter might have helped.
  2. I find the blue a little distracting. I'm assuming its some sort of card placed to clean up the background? Also the fill flash ratio seems a little too strong, givng the photo a harsh and unatural effect.

    Michelle

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    i like the composition and the soft background. a very pleasing portrait. I do agree with the previous poster that just a touch of fill, either from a flash or areflector might have added. One other nit; the horizon is not level. Maybe its the landscape photographer in me, but I find that to be a distraction. (a minor one though)

    Untitled

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    nice shot. I like the soft background. Compositionally, you might try moving the flower a little down an to the left, so that it opens into the photo rather than out of it.

    I agree with Carl, the flower could be a little sharper (unless you were going for a Monet type effect) With macro, everything is critical for sharpness, camera stabilitiy (tripod is a must), precise focus, no wind, etc.

  3. Well done. A horizontal framing might have worked for this shot to give the bird room to look into the frame. Of course the blank space on the vertical framing leaves space for the magazine mast head.
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