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dave miller

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    by train

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    Theres a lot of feeling in this picture, the figure on the right is important and well placed as a balance to the left-hand group. Would taking the station building on the left away completely make it even stronger?

    Untitled

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    Such shots as the four that you have shown us may be two a penny in the world that you inhabit, but to me down here on the ground, they are refreshingly different.

    Untitled

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    Next time use a tripod!

    Sorry couldnt resist that! However cutting off your leg would remove a distraction and improve things a little. Dramatic shot, well done.

    Amsterdam

          5
    The contrast between the new headstones and the older ones is good. I think the main pair are too central and should be shifted off centre by cropping if possible. I also think that the other new stones should be burned in so that we concentrate on the main items only.

    Rickshaw

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    Of all the pictures on your site at the moment this is my favourite. Two very small criticisms, I would like to have seen all the front wheel, and to have lost the grey shrubbery in the lower left, as I said, minor niggles. Well see.

    fishmen

          5
    I like this because it tells me something of a way of life of which I know little, and a very precarious one it seems to be. Good view point, but I find the fisherman to be just a little too dark.
  1. An extremely good environmental portrait. It shows the Spartan conditions as compared with western schools. I particularly like the expression of detached concentration of the nearest boy. Good lighting, composition, and the use of monochrome adds to my enjoyment.
  2. A colourful variation on a common theme. I would like to see the highlight on the lower left third toned down, also the lower left decking. The picked up boarder colour works well.
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