dominique

Nice pose, but the surrounding dont fit in here. The effect is therefore not so good. You should have either tried to arrange a better environment or process the photo a bit.

Yes, missing arms bring associations with a sculpture. But this piece of fabric doesnt go too well. Maybe linen would be better. But nice try.

it's very nice, but 1) female+vase has kind of been already quite exploited 2) not sure if color is needed here. But a good job.

Good model, not so bad effect, but ugly font and frame destroys the design.

I would prefer it turned 90deg. Nice soft-nude portrait with great use of colors.

Very original, it combines in a great way souvenir-like shots with some artistic climate. This is one of the two that I like most in the series.

That one is very nice. Well - everything, model, composition, lighting, background. This is the other one that I like most here. I dont do it too often, but I downloaded the two images.

 

General remarks on the folder: I dont quite get you: twice you made a perfect job. This one here is a piece of art, it's obvious, the other one I liked most could equally well be an unintended coincidence. But doesnt matter, the result is great. A few other photos are not bad either, but some of the rest looks just amatour. They actually remind me of my first erotic adventures during our first holidays with my friend, when we were discovering our bodies with a quickcam. They are great memories, but do not have too much in common with artistic photography.

It's good as a souvernir from nice holidays with a girfriend but is not at all convincing as an artistic work.

Dont you have more important things to photograph?

nice texture for a postcard.

very warm, impressionistic image.

very good photo - great composition and the subject. Great face! I would remove those few white stains - I would let the face drown into the pure darkness, which is a strong symbol of mature femininity in this context.

hey, nice idea! Usually in such a context one can only see sad boys with too big glasses. anyway, greatly depicts unconditional curiousity of children. and a *very* good diagonal composition, well done.

I like the idea for a photo. not bad composition and shadows but personally I strongly dislike the model.

very nice, artistic photo.

this is EXCELENT. i like the situation, it's a masterpiece. I guess this is a spontaneous shot rahter then a set-up. the guy on the left with a teddy-beer is seeing a reflection in a window and is looking at it with a surprise. (or is it an add? - doesnt matter). great story, funny situation and good shot!

interesting idea but I would try to take only the face against the window.

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I also looked at all the pics in this folder and they are quite well done. nice technique and atmosphere. but the pictures often (not always) miss out on something intriguing, those people or scenes are just ordinary, not much exciting or unexpected is happening. this is of course very personal and objective.

i like photographic collages and montages. I would neccessarily crop out the left part of the image (wall) which IMHO destroys a feeling of a collage - it tells the secret how you made it.

if you correct this I will rate this work 9/9.

although "stairs" is rather an exhausted topic I like that one. it's not pathetic like many of this kind, it's rather simple, but attracting. I like (intentional or accidental?) tilt and the angle - it makes quite an original composition. I only have a slight impression that it is either unsharp or badly scanned - I would correct that. I like this picture most of your b&w photos.

very good composition. to a sick mind like mine can be a source for some symbols ;) I think it could be a great illustration to one of my poems.

BTW. I would crop it slightly from the right or stamp out the edge in photoshop.

I very much like the interplay of those people. I like their expression and their balance (or lack of it). Warm, very emotional picture well done as to the composition, crop etc.

Very interesting. Made me think how you made it. It is vell balanced, I like the blurry backdrop image with the small sharp circle. One of your best images IMO.

i very much like this kind of light/shadow/shape compositions.

very nice abstraction well painted with a camera.

wow! nice shot and very nice scenery!