jaspurazarfar

What were you trying to portray? It feels like I'm looking at some popular art piece that got used as an advert for underwear, however the overt sexualisation of the anarchy symbol on gay-oriented figure has been very well executed.

How about putting in the originally, without the pastel blurring. Keep the white light show if it's part of the original.

Absolutely wonderful diatribe of colours! I am left gazing at it, it has a childish innocence to it, as if one were but a five year old and for the first time being impressed with the richness of fall.

 

Cheers

Any and all constructive critics welcome :D

I was looking into doing some overexposures, with either E6 or

digital. And this was my first digital one, now I've been told that E6

and digital look alike, and I was just looking for opinions on how my

first attempt looks, ideas/improvements/etc...

Forgive the slight imperfections, this was done with a camera phone

and it was my second attempt at club shots. And under which category

would I put this photo under??

Done in my university residence

you need to workout the lines/shadows out of the photo next time, if possible

As an aethist, this photo speaks to me in a very candid manner. That god has left us barren and desolate, but that as humans we will endevour to rise up. Very nicely done, try selecting the green or blue channel in PS and see how that works or trying adding a little more contrast.

 

-JM Azarfar

 

PS. Thanks for your support

This was my first attempts with nudes, about 4 yr ago

This is only the second time that I've done a fashion shoot, I am

wondering as to the aesthics and any technical faults that I may

have incurred, and so how I may resolve them.

 

Cheers,

jean-marc

Very nicely done, I'd add a little more contrast though.

Jag förstå. It reminds me of my childhood in Canada where the snow was so overwhelming at times.

Hey, try using the Ilford C-41 processed BW film, you get much more lattitude, though not as fine a grain. Though again, I'd prefer more lattitude in this photo than grain. Gorgeous photo by the way, reminds me of Nikol Fardini's early works.

Looks like the Canadian Prariries to me, but with much more cloud cover!

How did you control the contrast of the film to such a degree, I always find Agfa films to be too over-contrasted.

Very tranquil. Too bad that bloody twig has to stick out in the lower left corner.

I rather do like like the angle at with Big Ben was cut-off at. I more inclined toward minimalistic architecture, but it is nonetheless a technically well composed photo.

Any and all constructive criticism welcome about this photo and

others.

 

Thank you,

so, what is the story behind this one??

Nicely done, I would either gloss it up or soften it... I think it would be more appreciative it the photo didn't show so much detail.

How did you achieve this effect? It is simply beautiful.

This has got to be the most constructive criticism I have heard from a five year-old! "Ooh! Mommy that's ugly!"

I do not understand the photo's message, but I can't stop laughing at it for some reason...

Try this photo