waldenl

March 30, 2004

Think I like it better as a panoramic cropped just above the grass on the bottom.

March 5, 2004

DOF = Depth of Field

March 5, 2004

WTF? Canes? Neat.

March 5, 2004

Don't know that i love the white house(?) in the dead center of the shot, perhaps shifted to the left (pan right) would have been better.

You're the second person I've seen with the translucent framing, and the first with the two levels of frame. I like it.

March 5, 2004

Thing on sand under left hand. Hard to learn to watch out for that. I've plenty of shots w/people w/telephone poles growning out of their head.

March 5, 2004

At least on my screen the sky is too blown out. Is there anything there to burn in?

January 21, 2004

Real? He almost looks dropped in. Anyway, yes it works.

January 4, 2004

Is there any detail in the lampshade you can bring out with dodging? Just a little to blown out for my tastes. Nice idea.

January 4, 2004

Too much dark land. Try reversing. Move the horizon to the bottom 1/4 and make it very panoramic.

December 30, 2003

Wow! Now I've read your comments (was going to 'Critique Photos' before). If you're only 13 you (1) have a hell of a future and (2) have a hell of a dad. Keep up the good work!

December 30, 2003

Get rid of distraction in lower right and it's great. Crop or burn.

December 30, 2003

Angular placement of photo helps. Good job.

December 30, 2003

What's the picture in the picture thing. Too light, just distracts.

December 30, 2003

Well done. I don't ususally like the centered effect, but in this case I think croping top or bottom would lessen the story. Then again, I'm a sucker for sailing.