michael_devoue

The only thing I might change would be the sepia-like tone that many c-41 labs render monochrome negs. That aside, it's a wonderful image compositionally, with peak action, and a immediate emotional response. Great image!

I love the sweeping line in the compostion, and the sepia-like tone may add more than it detracts, but the bright spot at the end of the "line" of faces keeps my eyes towards it. I wouldn't mind seeing a bit more on the left side of the image (or more correctly the scene and it's contents at the time of it's capture). The lighting present here would have led me to reverse the line-up of children, and ensure all have eye contact, but this isn't always an option as we all understand. However, this is nitpicking and I like the overall composition. A well done group snap.