andrew_meaden

Please let me know what you think.

Andrew.

Any advice on how to improve is welcome.

Thanks,

Andrew.

How would you advise me to improve this ?

Thanks,

Andrew.

Here face / expression is very interesting. Is it a real woman or a model / dummy ?

I think this is a really interesting photo. The big face / the couple kissing.

Its a shame the other guy is in the middle although I guess this was taken unposed so there was nothing you could do about it ? Maybe he adds some interest as an onlooker though ?

I think this picture would be much more interesting if the camera was at a lower angle so we could see part of the model's face.

It also looks as if she is sitting under a spotlight which I don't think works too well.

Without wishing to offend anyone or seem rude I think there were probably much stronger photos uploaded this week e.g. the work by Piotr Zaporowski. And certainly some of the other photos such as "the fix" in the winners portfolio I think would make a much more worthy winner.

Just my humble opinion of course.

There is a small area around Harajuku station in central Tokyo where large amounts of teenage / twenty something girls gather at the weekends to hang out and show off their clothes. Its very popular with goth / punk / new romance types. Some of them wear the most amazing bizarre costumes / make up and then parade around / meet friends and generally hangout. Its one of my favourite places in Tokyo to take interesting pictures.

Andrew.