david_rice

Do you think the feet in the upper left hand corner of the picture add

to the picture or detract from it?

Do you think the modern truck in the middle right detracts from this

picture. Should it be cropped out? Also do you think I should burn

the tractor to bring out more detail in the shadows?

I cropped out the slide mount on the bottom. Also cleaned up some dust and dirt with the rubber stamp in Photoshop.

The bar and below it are the slide mount. I

must have forgot to crop it out. I will fix it and

submit it again.

Do you think this photo would be better if it were cropped? I am not

sure if the mountain in the foreground adds to the picture or not.

There is not much detail in it, but it may give the scene depth.

Interesting that you say that it looks like a metro station in DC. Its Union station in Los

Angeles, Califonia. I have been to D.C several

times but never photographed the stations there.

I never seem to take my tripod. I have

to admit the metro stations in both cities look very close to the same.

Interested in opinions regarding exposure, shadow detail, and overall

appeal

Do you think the light from the window adds or detracts from this

photograph?

Reletively new to B&W and I am interested in comments about this

photograph. I would like to get comments on the overall asthetics

and composition. This is the first roll of Ilford XP2 I have tried

and I am quite pleased with the grain/detail, have others had good

luck with it? What changes could I have made to improve this shot?